Well, Origins was rejected at Tier 2 from The Royal Guard, with some very useful feedback, useful because it's specific. I was already aware that the first few chapters are in desperate need of work, considering they're the first chapters of creative writing I've ever seriously written.

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Hey guys, my wonderful and fantastic story, Origins, is in need of more eyes looking for little-bitty errors that I may have missed when I reviewed each chapter myself. If you'd like to help, all you have to do is look for the problems and then PM me with whatever you found.

Thanks to anyone who helps out with this!

~WH

Here's a little snippet from the next chapter of Origins.

Taking two steps back, Midnight began to move in a counter-clockwise circle, looking for weaknesses in the pegasus’ stance. Unfortunately for him, she seemed strong and agile, and could probably break his kyintaris in half with her hammer if he didn’t execute his lunges perfectly. A rapier was never meant to block a heavy warhammer.

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Origins has been updated with Chapter Six - The Company of Three! And with this comes the new cover image, courtesy of stheneboea on DeviantArt.

What's next, you ask? Well, we'll be returning to the Great Shadow to see how they're preparing for the war.

Thanks for reading, guys!

Hey guys, I just thought I'd let you know that chapter 7 of Origins is in the proofreading and editing stage. I'll try to have it out by Christmas!