Results from The Royal Guard

Well, Origins was rejected at Tier 2 from The Royal Guard, with some very useful feedback, useful because it's specific. I was already aware that the first few chapters are in desperate need of work, considering they're the first chapters of creative writing I've ever seriously written.

Happily, in the comments (which were qualified as not exhaustive or complete) there was no mention of the later chapters of the story, which I feel are much better than the first three or four. I've learned a lot and gained some valuable experience, which I intend to continue making use of as I continue with Origins.

Thanks to my followers and those of you who are watching Origins. Your support means a lot to me, and I hope you're enjoying the tale I've created.

Have a wonderful evening!

~WH