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Jul
11th
2014

Story Discussion: New Content · 3:55am Jul 11th, 2014

I have been getting some really wonderful feedback from someone named LovinLife, and I can’t thank this user enough for the praise and criticism. While his (her?) praises have helped boost my desires to keep writing, his criticism has given me good reason to go back over my work to make it stronger.

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Apr
2nd
2014

Story Discussion: Smithy the High Diver · 3:28pm Apr 2nd, 2014

So, Applejack just got her key, and we find out that our Granny Smith was once a high diver. While that does mess with my story, it has potential to make things better.

Think about it: a high diving act in a traveling circus is a good cover for smuggling illegal goods. This could make for an interesting development for the Faction of the Stud.

It'll take some retooling, but I am liking the idea so far.

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Jan
13th
2014

Story Discussion: Auntie Velvet or Uncle Fairly Rich? · 4:41pm Jan 13th, 2014

I love how writing can give you options, but sometimes those options can throw you for a loop. I am in that loop boat right now.

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Dec
16th
2013

Story Discussion: Two Chapters Up, Two Computers Down, and One Chapter Edited · 2:00am Dec 16th, 2013

So new content is on it's way in The Private Scrapbook! I made two new chapters (Go Ahead, I'm Listening and Kizzy's Choice) and edited The Final Sign, Now calling it Return to Dodge City. The new chapters include a psychic evaluation and addictive personality in Smithy and Kizzy's decision to go back to Zebrica. The reedit shows some of the economic effects of emancipation, and starts describing the effects of war on Equestria, including the Draft that kills Fairly Rich.

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Dec
6th
2013

Story Discussion: New Content Has Begun! · 5:15am Dec 6th, 2013

Hello my wonderful watchers. I just want to say thank you to all of you for your amazing feedback, useful suggestions, and overall amazing support for my story, The Private Scrapbook. It means the world to know that you all are able to give me some very good advice on making a story I am already proud of even better than it was before. I have you, my readers, to thank for this, and for the ideas to expand upon it further.

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