Have you ever heard or read a comment that completely change a story just because it is an interesting take and you never thought of it, I did and that is why the third chapter, Objective Achieved, Redeployment Imminent, went into development hell. Reasons like life, the first draft dialogue was stale and didn't make too much sense. It was one comment by AgentKorpsman that threw the biggest wrench in my plans. It was a good

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