So my editor was shown a parody site that turns what you put into it into "Ghetto speak", so he ran the prologue of my story through it... this is what came out...

WARNING!!! Swear words ahead...

Todizzle was just not StarChaser’s day.

Just when tha Resistizzle (any mo' betta scams welcome) had finally thought dat it would be left ridin' solo tha Unicorn tribe had decided ta go n' fuck up every last muthafuckin thang again.

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Exactly what the title says, I just want some feedback on how I'm doing on my story.

What I did right, what I did wrong, and what I "dun goofed".

That's it, I just want to improve.

Well, I finally got it started, I'm now writing a story!

Why don't you check it out? Remember, if you down vote it, please say in the comment section why you didn't like it so I can improve.