New Chapter almost done · 5:35am Jun 2nd, 2017
And yes I have heard the criticism. Thanks for the comments though. Really had to take some time off to take them into consideration and realize what I wanted to write might not impress everyone and that the way I write characters definitely turn some people away Good criticism is good criticism to be sure- way better to know what might be turning some people away at the moment than silence and no explanation to a small influx of downvotes. But yeah we are now going to be back on track.