Hey, I helped another friend with editing for their story.

This one is about a Sans character locked in Tartarus who strikes a deal with the Princesses to “take care of” (and by that I mean psychologically break) one of their more trouble some prisoners. There’s more too it than that but if that sounds interesting, give it a try.

TA Fatal Error Has Occurred

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Drama
• Horror

He was murdered in a place where one cannot die. Memories and hope, ripped from him in a flash of light. From one prison he came, and into another he was thrown. But he will get out, nothing lasts forever.

• Violence
• Crossover
• Celestia
• Luna
• Nightmare Moon
• Other
• Tirek

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