So after another week with no progress on the next chapter I've decided to take a break and come back in August. Maybe getting my mind off this project will do me some good. I've been thinking about maybe getting started on the next hero in my Alternate Universe. So you might see something new coming soon, depending on how things go.

(Update.) I've gone ahead and decided to begin work on my next story MidKnight Begins. Hopefully my illustrator will have a cover ready for me by August.

So Here's an update on the latest chapter of Comet The Stallion of Steel. I've written a new title called A Royal Visit. Introduced Princess Celestia a couple chapters earlier than anticipated. And I've had her present the tree that crashed into her castle three chapters ago. But now I find myself stuck and In need of some ideas. What do you think should happen next?

Here's what I've got confirmed so far. Leave any ideas you think should happen next in the comments below.

YOU WHAT!!!

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So I've been thinking about the chain of events that lead up to Kolton's destruction and thinking to myself, how could their race sit back and delay the inevitable? Well I got to thinking what if they didn't? What if the cataclysm caused by the destruction of Kolton's second moon wiped out 50% of Kolton's population. Damage to the climate control network the Koltonians used to control their weather caused by falling meteorites created increasingly destructive weather resulting in the

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My story so far has focused on Comet's foalhood and his powers manifesting, and it's turned out a lot longer than I thought it would when I first started this story. And yet I think it's not going to be as long as I thought, it just feels that way after six months. So for the next chapter I'm gonna jump ahead to Comet as an young adult. taking a journey to discover where he belongs in the world.

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So yesterday I decided that the plot of the current chapter was drifting away from what I originally intended. In order to correct this I re-wrote the ending to Chapter 10 and am currently rewriting most of Chapter 11, So thats' going to take longer than originally anticipated. But on the brighter side I've got some exciting news. A partially finished scene for you to contribute to.
*Slight Spoilers*

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So after the airing of The Perfect Pear It became evident that It would be necessary to go back and re-edit my earlier chapters. Thankfully It didn't require much other than changing some names, descriptions and a few lines of dialog. It feels good to have that weight off my shoulders and hopefully it'll help get my creative juices flowing. But anyway go check them out if you've got the time.

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Since I'm stuck waiting for inspiration to strike, I might as do what any stumped author does. Answer questions. Just submit your questions below and I'll get to answering them. They can be about Comet, Kolton, Jav-El, Loran, The Apple Family, Any Canon characters or whatever you want as long as it's related to the story. So send your questions in and I'll get to answering them.

So I'm thinking maybe instead of Celestia visiting the orchard as herself, I'd have her use her magic to disguise herself as a "Representative from the Castle". So that she can keep a low profile while she investigates. I'd like to hear your thoughts on this and maybe some ideas for an alias. I'm working on a very nice false mustache that I think is really going to go places. I've got an eye appointment tomorrow so I'm going to bed now.

By now most of you have probably noticed I haven't submitted a chapter in almost a month. Well there's a pretty good reason for that. I could have had it ready for submission sometime this week but I didn't like the direction things were going so I decided to do some reediting.

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So for the next chapter I have Comet being put thru four different challenges to help him learn to control his powers.

The first test is to control his strength. The second is control his speed. The third will help him master his super senses. And the final one is for breath control. I've got one and three figured out, Now I just need to finish two and four.

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So seeing as I'm having a little writers block at the moment, I figured I'd waste some more of your time with some of my ideas that'll probably won't get to anytime soon. These are my ideas for SuperMare, Not sure I'll even call her that.

So anyway I was thinking her name was Tara-El and her father is Jav-El's older brother Zav-El.

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Alright, For today's blog answer this question. Who would you ship Comet with? One of the Mane 6? A background character? Someone from the DC universe? A filly at school?

Leave your answer and why you think it would make a good shipping in the comments below.

So those of you following this story might have noticed by now the title change for The Apple Family Way Part 2. Well The reason is I did some thinking, and decided I wasn't satisfied with the way it sets up the next chapter.

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I've just seen that as of Tuesday May 9th 2017 Comet The Stallion has officially hit over 300 views!!!

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So Yesterday my Editor https://www.fimfiction.net/user/PlatinumPony sent me a report detailing the spelling errors and grammar mistakes he found along with a few suggestions on keeping the characters in character. So after a good nights sleep and a day off from work I decided to make the most and look into it. It's been five months since I started work on this story and obviously I've better at writing than I was when I started. So naturally I found plenty of the errors and mistakes he was

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So this morning I learned that my sister in law's father had a heart attack. My brother and her are taking a trip to Texas to see him which means my nephews are going to be staying here until wednesday. I've got work three days this week and I don't do well writing wise when it's crowded so yeah the next chapter may take even longer. I'm really sorry about all this. I've kept you on edge for almost four weeks while I iron out the next chapter but hang in there, I'm doing the best I can under

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Hey everyone Stallion of Steel here, Just wanted to let you know that things are going a bit slow at the moment. I'm working three days a week at Deans Greenhouse from March to May for seven hours a day, so I don't have a lot of energy to write. I was meaning to get more done today but my nephews came over and I just can't concentrate when I have visitors. I've got work tomorrow but I'll try to get some more done Saturday.

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Before I start I'd like to say that I don't know if I'll even do a Comet Story set in the Equestria Girls world. This is simply an idea at the moment. That said here is what I think Comet would look like in the mirror world.

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I'm looking for someone to help with editing my stories. I'm pretty sure theres spelling errors and scenes that could be written better. I'd do it myself but I've got to work three days a week and I'd like to spend my time either writing or brainstorming. All I need is someone to look over my previous chapters and let me know of any spelling or continuity errors or any sentences you think could be written better. If anyone's interested in the job let me know.

Hey Everybrony It's me again just want to say this blog will be a follow up to my last one. In my last blog I asked you to post either any questions you wanted Comet to ask his parents or any questions you want to ask me? Now in this blog It's going to be my turn to ask you all questions. I just so happen to have ten with me right now. So if your ready we can begin.

1. How should Comet and the Mane Six meet?

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