Yeah, I am, because I found it was lacking something to the plot. Had it not been for a friend of mine to comment on it, it would have no direction on where exactly it should be heading down to.

And, the reason for rewriting "Return of Nightmare Moon" was something I want to, since it show physical pain on the characters--Dawn and Crimson--so that is the reason with rewriting the beginning.

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Hey guys, so me and my friend is going to resume writing the [late] prologue to DBT. I hope you can get a few clear points on what the main character's life was on Earth.

We're already 2400 words into the prologue, and we have a few ways to go before it is considered done and completed, before it is ready for posting. I just wanted to notify you all on the past life of Dawn Darkness (myself) just before his arrival in Equestria.

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