Rewriting Chapters 1-4 of "Dawn Before Twilight" · 1:17pm Dec 3rd, 2020
Yeah, I am, because I found it was lacking something to the plot. Had it not been for a friend of mine to comment on it, it would have no direction on where exactly it should be heading down to.
And, the reason for rewriting "Return of Nightmare Moon" was something I want to, since it show physical pain on the characters--Dawn and Crimson--so that is the reason with rewriting the beginning.
I hope you all understand this very thing, my friends. This was a quick note to you so you know what is being working on. The rest is slightly okay, as that is where the show's first season starts and all. But, I want to rewrite that too, for the world-building and interaction between the characters.
Anyway, have a good Thursday, everyone. Enjoy it!