This chapter has kicked my butt. Seriously, no matter what I did, it just didn't feel right. First, it was the next part of K'Vann's investigation feeling like it was completely out of place, so I decided to make it a separate chapter, but that just made me realize that the main part of the chapter was waaay too short. So I go back and fluff it out a bit, but then while re-reading it I start feeling like the characters actions don't make any sense which lead to me ultimately changing and in

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Hey all, sorry about the lack of updates. I'm aiming for one chapter every 2 weeks to a month but this particular chapter is proving difficult. I have most of it written but it just feels awkward. Like, it works but it feels like something a 12 year old would wright, no offense to any 12 year old literary prodigies out there. Thus, I find myself going back and altering and in some cases outright changing certain scenes that I already have written. The good news is, I finally have a good idea of

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Chapter 5 is half finished. Sorry I can't give a window for completion, my writing schedule is... oh who am I kidding, I don't have a schedule, I wright when I get a chance to. Anyway, this next chapter will see even more changes to how the episode played out. Depending on how long it gets I might split it. If it gets over 10k words without the next scene with Kevin then I'll just put his part in a short interlude chapter.

Just a heads up that Chapter 4 is being worked on. It's taking so long because there's one part that I had to devote a lot of time to. I had to carefully analyses every word of dialogue to make sure I was dropping hints without giving away the answer. It's a lot harder than it looks as it turns out. Then there is the challenge of following the story while making it different enough to stand on its own. Other wise you might as well just watch the show.

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Chapter 3 is coming along nicely, the lead in took some time to polish but now that I'm into the actual 'episode' things are progressing much faster. Hopefully it will be done by early next week.

Apparently, having an appendix chapter in your story is frowned upon in this establishment, so here it is in a blog post. Some information is spoilers and as such wont be added until the chapter it first appears in is posted, expect this page to grow indefinitely.

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