Let's check it out and then I'll focus on the battle.

Let me know what you think

The next morning was alive with the sound of the bugles, waking up the allied forces. As the regular forces were just beginning to get out of bed, the cooks had already started the fires, throwing the food onto their pans for breakfast.

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Honestly, there have been times I've wanted to just give up this story and cancel it, but then I've thought, will you all really understand what's going on if I don't continue?

So I placed it on break as I sat down and thought about it and started to improve it.

Do I feel like I'm making much headway? No. Of the rewriting, I'm still working on eight and I have nine and ten to do. Thinking of just writing all the chapters at once and edit them one at a time.

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I'll provide a small portion from ILOE chap 8 and you can decide how it should be done.

Game part: Winner of the idea, which I will give credit for, get's to have an OC Spot in a future chapter for this story or any of my other stories that I'm working on, except for the one I got from someone else.

Here's the part

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At Sweet Apple Acres, during the Lennex Counterattack at Ponyville, the 18th Infantry regiment of Guardian Force is holding off against three Lennex regiments. Outnumbered, they've been given their orders to hold the line until reinforcements arrive or they're wiped out to the last man.

(still need to work on the ground and place some trees, including the club house, used as an MG post or Sniper nest.

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How many would actually be willing to write the tagged story from the Lennex Empire's view?

I mean, for now we're seeing the Imperial/Equestrian Alliance view of it, but what would the Lennex soldier see during this whole war? What would the Lennex conscripts see as their comrades were cut down? What would the typical Lennex soldier (clones of their leader) see as waves of Imperial forces charged their lines and cut them down?

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and chapter will be done and sent for editing

When dusk fell, a group of twenty Imperial tanks rolled to the frontlines as others were still being unloaded.

"Gunner, target the cannons directly in front of us." The tank commander ordered.

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every time I hear this song, I keep thinking of what to do for the Battle of Manehatten.
All elements of the Imperial/Equestrian Alliance fighting one last battle together.

maybe one last battle or they may fight alongside each other in the future.

The Emperor's Guard
Guardian Force
Imperial 1st Army
Imperial 2nd Army
Imperial 3rd Army
Imperial 5th Army
Imperial Empire Marine Corps
Imperial Commandos
Imperial Airborne
Imperial Royal Air Force
Imperial Navy
Imperial Defense Armies
Imperial 6th Army
Imperial Militia Groups

Pick which ones you would not want to fight.

the person that was editing is going to be gone for a while so this story might go on break. However, while waiting, I can at least go ahead and get the other chapters finished up and even go further than what I had before.

Who knows. By October, the entire story might be ready ready for editing and done.

either from ILOE or other stories

from ILOE
Yuri
Moonlight
Klavdiya

Which types of music would work for this.

I'll divide it up into sections.

Section 1

With the Battle of Ponyville over, the Imperial and Equestrian armies began to gather up all the dead and wounded. For the Imperials, the losses totaled to five hundred dead with another seven hundred and fifty injured. The Equestrians took fewer losses. thirty injured and five dead.

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Who would like to see this story from the Lennex Empire's P.O.V?

This version is the Equestrian/Imperial Alliance view. How would a Lennex view do?

About the Imperial Military? Anything you would really like to know?

I want to have this part alone be around 2-3k words so how can I flesh it out?

"Gunner, target the cannons directly in front of us." The tank commander ordered.

"Yes, sir," The main gun rose a few inches. "Shell away!" The tank's main gun opened fire, hitting the battery’s gunpowder, destroying the battery in the explosion. When the Lennex troops heard the shooting, they immediately sent out all 3,000 of their tanks in that sector.

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Let me know of grammar and all that.

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I'll just show you want I have before you get to the older part of the chapter

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Yeah, I need some Resistence fighters and maybe two Lennex officers for the fighting at Dodge Junction.
I'll need the following

Name:
Gender:
Faction: (Equestria or Lennex Empire/I'll assign the ranks of the two officers)
Weapon: (If Equestria, up to Renasance age weapons only. If Lennex, NO ASSAULT WEAPONS AND ALL THAT!)
Short Bio: (Remember you might not get your waifu or the character you'd want yours to end up with)

The the old version, I had Imperial tanks lure the Lennex tanks out of their depot while commando's raided it, knocking out a lot of Lennex fuel and ammo, attacking a bunker to steal important docs, and get the hell out. The Imperial tanks and arty wiped out the entire Lennex tank corps.

Now, how can we flesh it out?

Also, should the commando's use their flame throwers as they did in chapter 6?

I know I promised an update this weekend, but that won't be happening. It'll be next week I'm afraid. I had some trouble the past few days and lost my creative skill on writing.

The next morning was alive with the sound of the bugles, waking up the allied forces. As the regular forces were just beginning to get out of bed, the cooks had already started the fires, throwing the food onto their pans for breakfast.

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