Just need to flesh this out · 9:55pm Jul 19th, 2015
and chapter will be done and sent for editing
When dusk fell, a group of twenty Imperial tanks rolled to the frontlines as others were still being unloaded.
"Gunner, target the cannons directly in front of us." The tank commander ordered.
"Yes, sir," The main gun rose a few inches. "Shell away!" The tank's main gun opened fire, hitting the battery’s gunpowder, destroying the battery in the explosion. When the Lennex troops heard the shooting, they immediately sent out all 3,000 of their tanks in that sector.
"Mount your tanks, men!" "Hurry!" "Incoming Fire!" The crews ran to their vehicles and started them up. These tanks were relatively weaker when compared to the previous force in Ponyville as their main guns were smaller while they moved at a slower speed. When the Lennex tanks left, numerous squads of 4 or 5 Imperial commandos came out of hiding and began to cause havoc surprising the Lennex garrison.
"Imperials to the rear!" The Lennex troops tried to fight back, but were cut down by the commandos' superior firepower from their SMG's, bolt action, and semi automatic rifles.
"Keep moving!" The commandos ran behind cover to keep from getting shot. "Find cover!"
"Rally around me!" "Let's get out of here!" "Turn around and fight!" "Run for your lives!" The officers orders confused the Lennex soldiers to the point of confusion.
"Cover me, I'm reloading!" "Bazooka, over here!" "Grenade!" "Pour it into them!" "Get that MG set up!" The Imperials didn't show any mercy to their Lennex counterparts. What made the raid worse for the Lennex Empire was their fuel and ammo supply was specifically targeted and destroyed.
"Cpl. George, search that bunker. Take Pvt.'s Davis, John, Terry, and Meisha with you!" Ordered the commando officer. The four ran up to the door of the bunker. Pvt. Davis kicked the door open allowing Terry to toss a grenade into the opening.
"Fire in the hole!" He shouted. They held their ears as the grenade went off. Screams rang out after the explosion rocked the bunker. Meisha and John ran inside and opened fire with their SMG's, killing any survivors.
"Split up. Davis, John, and Terry, go right. Meisha, with me. We'll go left!" They broke off to search the rooms. Davis, John, and Terry entered the barracks and killed the Lennex soldiers that were sleeping. George and Meisha wiped out the radios before moving on. They regrouped outside the command room. Davis once again kicked down the door as all five ran into the room killing the last of the Lennex soldiers. After the room was secured, they began searching for any intel until John found something on the table.
"Sir, over here!" The others walked over to him.
"Let's get this back to HQ." They left the bunker and met up with their transports. Meanwhile, with the Imperial tanks, the Lennex armor was approaching slowly. The Imperial tank commander, Lt. David Soap, waited until they were in range before giving his order.
"Blow 'em up, boys!" He shouted. The Imperial forces opened fire to devastating effects as the Imperials' superior range and firepower carried the day, blowing all the Lennex tanks to pieces. The artillery opened up, blowing the rear armor into nothing.
"Return Fire!" The Lennex officer ordered.
"We can't," the gunner replied, "we're out of range!" Just as he turned back to the gun, their tank was rocked by an enemy shell, setting the engine on fire. Seconds later, the tank exploded, killing both crew members. During the raid, important maps were found in the Lennex Command Bunker and brought to the Imperial HQ.
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What others have already said
Abyss
"Imperials to the rear!" The Lennex troops tried to fight back, but were cut down by the commandos' superior firepower from their SMG's, bolt action, and semi automatic rifles.
Why not write this scene out?
SouthernCross
During the raid, important maps were found in the Lennex Command Bunker and brought to the Imperial HQ.
Write out this scene. How where they found? Where did they find them and by whom?
goal is to have this section reach 3000 words.
