Well, everything's already in the thread's title. But it wouldn't hurt to get the proper phrasing and some explanations.
Please, could someone review my story's first chapter so i can submit it to the site ?
You see, since i'm french, i might be very clumsy in how i phrase my ideas. So if someone could give me a quick review so i know what to change to get my story to get pass the submission step.
Well, everything's already in the thread's title. But it wouldn't hurt to get the proper phrasing and some explanations.
Please, could someone review my story's first chapter so i can submit it to the site ?
You see, since i'm french, i might be very clumsy in how i phrase my ideas. So if someone could give me a quick review so i know what to change to get my story to get pass the submission step.