I need Someone to pre read this story. If interested PMhttps://www.fimfiction.net/story/331894/the-path-of-six-life

What do you need proof-reading, editor, or pre-reader.
I can pre-read if you want, i'm not the best in grammar since my story got hate for some reasons including grammar (Note:pre-read is for someone to give a opinion on a story, editor changes grammar issues, and proof-readers fix grammar and give a opinion)