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BronieMan305 #1 · Feb 5th, 2013 · · ·

my story is not out yet officially just wanted some people to read it tell me there opinions and give some tips. for chapter one and two click here

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hahatimeforponies #2 · Feb 5th, 2013 · · ·

Okay, I'm seeing a lot of mistakes here, I can run through the ones in Chapter One that jump out at me if you like?

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