So yeah the title explains it all really. I am making a new story and I am already on the second chapter. The story is "My Teacher Wild Horse". May haps you've heard of it.

...No?

Well, guess it is not important. Like I said, I am currently writing chapter two and one of my readers said chapter one had a lot of double posted words. So I decided I should get someone to read over what I have got.

Story Here!

Comments are turned on so let me know where I am screwing up. Just so you know, the story is being written from the perspective of a journal. It is first person for the most part, but their is going to be third person for events that are actually taking place rather than events that have passed.