Hi,

I have a written the first chapter of my story and posted it onto the site. Someone gave me a comment that said I needed to work on my tense. Apparently my paragraphs go from past tense to present tense to past and so on and so forth.

So if anyone is willing, I need them to go over the story and highlight each word, sentence or paragraph that is not in the past tense because that's the tense I would like to write in.

Here is the link to the story: 'To Find the Light' by Crystal Secret

Please help.

- Crystal Secret

I will try and take a look later.