Hey y'all looking to edit a story I got one. I promise its a good read but there maybe quit a few grammar mistakes. Thats because grammar is not my strong point. Don't worry is criticism accepted. I always like to know the truth so it could be better. No nasty comments. That I will not accept. Just strong
criticism. My story is called Broken Balance. Here is the description
Description: Prequel for the Book Series The Creation of Harmony:
Celestia and Luna both ruled Equestria with peace and prosperity by creating a balance of Day and Night. When the Princesses are over thrown and banished to the Sun and Moon a threat is casted upon a Equestria for eternity. Only one force of nature can stop this horrible destruction. For a prophecy for told by the great ancestors of Equestria that only one force of nature can stop this threat. Harmony. How can harmony be created? Who will create this Harmony and when?
Tell me if you interested.

Gleaming Amber

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