A few days, I submitted my first story in that’s told in the second person.

The story is called Vacant Niches. Set in the Equestria Girls world, you're a middle school graduate moving from Florida ready to start your first year in high school. You expect the typical things you see on TV, especially the bullying. You're wrong at first, but then you find that there are... worse people.

So far, it has gained five likes and three dislikes, with the feedback so far that I haven’t delved into you as the character (which is a natural mistake on my part, being my first second person story and all). Is it the best story? No, but it’s certainly not the worst. Is my grammar the best? No, but I am only one man. Anyway, I am willing to give a trade review if anyone wants to take a gander and say what you think.