Hello there, fellas. I'm looking for a feedback before publication of the story. I couldn't find it anywhere else so that's why I came here. If you want to help me with that: please let me know here in replies or in personal chat. I will reply to you as soon as I able to. I will be really happy to get some second opinion before publication of the things I wrote.

I short: I'm making a story about street racing with romantic line in the background.

Things I need:

1) mostly the grammar stuff (English isn't my native language)

2) General stuff (Things you like and don't like in my story)

3) suggestions on how can I make it more interesting

4) hopefully someone, who's good with cars.

U can check the thing here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qk7OFVx6cpE2fFE79P4BRYgNxPGODDmc/edit?pli=1