I'm in need of a second look-over my work over in Google Docs. Please just focus on Part I, being Bring Me a Dream. I intend on proofreading Part II myself before I ask for the next part, but if you're interested we can keep in touch for that.

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Uh you mean hallucination, right? Sorry, just saw that and wondered if maybe that was referring to some kind of Hell based hallucination.

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Nope, Hallucination. I had it wrong, lol. Probably spelled it better in the fanfic description.

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OKay thanks.

Also I can edit for you if you want, my editor info is on my profile.