I may need help in trying to proofread M-Rated stories in MLP Fimfiction, as well as sorting the out the past and present tense words in each and every one of them. I may have taken reading and writing classes in UW Tacoma and in Green River Community College, but I can't tell if my wording is awkward or not. Also, how am I supposed to know that it doesn't make sense to anyone anyway?! Other than that, thanks for replying.

My M-rated stories done so far:

1. Starlight's Summer Pleasure

2. Fluttershy's Watery Nights