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Hey, when Vern tries to get proof of the Turtles, Thrash and Moonie will dupe him into walking into the alley of those bikers the Ducks stopped.

When Vern tries again, Buzz and the CMC could sneak his phone and replace it with a video of him getting beat up by the bikers.

Nosedive: Uh, those punks again.

Raph: I think they'd get along with the Purple Dragons.

Caitlyn: Can I get a copy of that?

Oh, and maybe Gammer can meet Tanya's friend Dr Huggarman, and is surprised by his deep distrust on humanity. He might say that Gammer is the only human he can trust.

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So, would the turtles meet Vern eventually in this fic?

And if they do, I betcha Raph would grab him by the shirt and hold him against the wall.

Raph: If you tell anyone, we will find you. And then, this flacon will be nothing more than a stuffed turkey!

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I could try doing that. And maybe I can do the Vern and the punks seen in the Bugman chapter

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And it’s only one M in Gamer

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Maybe Grin can also tell Gamer about his encounter with Stanley Strazinski.

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Grin laid a hand on his shoulder, "Gamer, you must remember that not all inventors are unredeemable. Some who are blinded by their pride in knowledge must have some good in them. Just as I believed there was good in our old hockey rival, Stanley Strazinski."

"Stanley Strazinski?!" Casey exclaimed.

Gabby spat out her water, "?!Estás bromeando?!"

"THE Stanley Strazinski?!" Zach asked in shock.

"Oh yeah," Nosedive confirmed. "Believe me, I thought Grin was totally nutsoid for thinking that too."

"Um, who's Stanley Strazinski?" Fluttershy asked.

"Stanley Strazinski was a center player on the Polar Bears hockey team," Casey explained. "And he was the nastiest, dirtiest, most aggressive player on the ice!"

Gabby added, "That guy got penalties for tripping, slashing, high sticking, and especially for clobbering the referee."

"Oh my word!" Rarity gasped.

"Talk about a bad sport," Rainbow crossed her arms.

"Yeah, and because of that, no hockey team could ever beat him," Zach said. "Except one..."

"And who was that?" Donnie asked.

"Us," Wildwing answered.

"We were the only team he couldn't beat," Mallory added.

"No matter what dirty trick that jerkwead pulled, we always came out on top," Nosedive boasted.

"Aw yeah!" Rainbow cheered.

"Booyakasha!" Mikey exclaimed.

"I wouldn't celebrate just yet," Duke advised. "Stanley held one heck of a grudge on us and that came back to bite us in the tail feathers."

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I might be able to squeeze this in. I knew the Hockey players would know about him.

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Here's the rest of the explanation.

Part 2

"Well you see, Dragaunus had a DNA enhancer ray, and when he found out about our beef with Stanley, he used it to turn him into a huge purple ragging monster!" Tanya explained.

"And boy did he give us a pounding!" Nosedive added. "Even Grin was no match for him."

"Oh my!" Fluttershy gasped.

"Ouch!" Shine Boy winced.

"Reminds me of when we first fought Hun as a mutant," Raph recalled.

"Well, dispite all that, I still believed their was good in Stanley," Grin said. "So through remembering the teachings of my sensei, I was eventually able to give Stanley enlightenment and showed him the error of his ways."

"Meanwhile, Tanya and I were captured by Dragaunus and he used his DNA Enhancer to make an energy monster," Duke put in. "When low and behold, Stanley came to our rescue and helped us defeat that thing.

"How did you that?" Apple Bloom asked.

"Me and Nosedive lured it to a water tower where Duke and Tanya caused it to trip, then Grin and Stanley dumped the tower on the monster, shorting it out," Wildwing answered.

"And during the fight, Stanley was reverted back to his old self," Mallory added.

"Afterwards, he apologized for all the trouble he gave us," Grin said. "But, he decided that he was unfit to play hockey and gave up playing it."

"So after all that, he just quit?!" Rainbow asked incredulously.

"I wouldn't say quit, but yes," Grin nodded. "However, he did not stray too far from hockey as he became the substitute referee."

"Stanley a ref?!" Casey said dumbfounded.

Caitlyn checked her phone, "Huh, he's right, look." She showed them all a video of Stanley telling a dirty player that he was out of the game for unsportsmanlike behavior.

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Here’s a little something to add to that.

“I run a clean game here! I have NO room for ruffians like you!” Stanley said in the video.

“I like to see dirty players try to knock him out!”
Night Shine smirked before biting some jerky.

“Well, at least he’s still employed and able to be near the game.” Cadence smiled.

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Fun idea. In the fiction, Phil’s trying to hire a band/artist to play for the halftime show in the game at the finale. Here’s a couple artists I have so far that will be mentioned:

-Post Crush (of course)
-Stan Bush
- The Hex Girls (from Scooby Doo)

And that’s all I have so far. I’m open to any suggestions, both real and fictional. As a reminder, The Rainbooms get to preform and convince Phil after the final battle.

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Good mentions to PostCrush and the Hex Girls

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You could mention Fun Time Rush. The Color Strikes (who Caitlyn and the Rainbooms will instantly shoot down.) The Oh Boys.

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Yes! I forgot about Fun Time Rush!

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Thank you. I thought I’d mention the Hex Girls since Jebens1 is planning a Scooby Doo crossover

Can you maybe idk add canard returning in this story like returning and reuniting with the team?

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I’m thinking about it. Just wait and see.

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Hey, when they demutate Spider Bytes, what if Klaghorn actually knows him and arrests him for a crime he committed that he had to skip town for, which was selling counterfeit lottery tickets.

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Oh that’ll be sweet revenge!

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I got something when Klegghorn arrests Vic:

“Your rights? You’re under arrest for selling counterfeit lottery tickets, resisting arrest, assault a couple kids, disturbing the peace, and above all, INSULTING A POLICE OFFICER!”

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Oh, yeah. He was very rude as a human.

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I think I’ll add Falcone in the fiction. He was arrested on Earth after he tried to double cross Dragaunus.

I’m gonna make it that Dragaunus re recruits him in order to to get the final fragment. He’ll appear in the ‘Case of the Killer Pizzas’ and will be around in the final battle.

Any objections?

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Case of the Killer Pizzas?

Hearing that title, does this mean, who I think it means, is coming?

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Pizza face? No. It was an episode from the 80’s ninja turtles.

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Oh, gotcha. Sorry, just not that knowledgeable of the 80’s episodes.

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Nice, and that was one of my fave 80s episodes

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No problem. Hope you enjoy when I get there.

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Yep and it’s gonna get the ENG treatment

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I'm on board with it.

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This should be interesting. I'm in!

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Hey, Turtle Nexus just uploaded a video talking about the Eye of Sarnath.

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Interesting. I might use some elements of the Archie Comics story for the final battle.

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I've edited the quotes of Spider Bytes getting knocked out by Caitlyn driving the Party Wagon right into him.

Suddenly, Spider Bytes was interrupted by the sound of a roaring engine, then he and the heroes turned to see the Party Wagon speed out from around the corner and come to a quick stop. The Turtles and Allies were surprised to see who was at the wheel.

"Caitlyn?!"

"So that's where she ran off too," Pinkie said brightly.

Caitlyn glared at Spider Bytes before she stomped on the gas. The Party Wagon's tires squealed and the van shot forward.

"Scatter!" Wildwing cried as everyone quickly ran out of the way as the Party Wagon raced past them and straight at Spider Bytes.

"Oh cru-" he was cut off when the Party Wagon plowed right into him and smashed him into a wall with a loud BAM! Caitlyn backed the van up, revealing Spider Bytes encased in the wall groaning in a daze. Then he fell onto the ground unconscious.

"Take that, you icky we crawler!" Caitlyn exclaimed.

"Well..." Donnie said, a bit taken aback. "That makes securing his venom a lot easier."


"Say, why don't we talk about this as we're FLYING THE HECK AWAY FROM THAT BIG BUG?!

"Uh, technically he's an arachnid," Donnie corrected him.

"Get a grip, you big baby!" Mallory ordered.

"Caitlyn just knocked him out," Rainbow reminded. "So I'm pretty sure he's no longer a threat.

However, as the two spoke, Spider Bytez woke up and saw one of the heroes' weapons laying close by before he gave a wicked grin.

"Yeah," Mikey added. "Spider Bytes is down and out!"

"Guess again, frog!" Everyone wipped around to see Spider Bytez aiming the bazooka at them! "Nobody uses me as a speed bump!"

"Never mind..." Mikey squeaked.

"Prepare to fry, mooks!" Spider Bytes growled.

But then Tanya spoke, "Uh, I wouldn't fire that thing if I were you..."

"Well you ain't me!" Spider Bytez pulled the trigger and the bazooka fired... out the other end, sending him rocketing forward. "Mamma!"

Everyone ducked as the spider mutant flew over them and went bouncing off building as he flew into the distance.

"You were holding it backwards," Tanya finished dryly.

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Holding their weapon backwards, classic.

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Hey, I was thinking, maybe in another crossover chapter, they could help out the Spy Racers. Since LA is close to Anaheim. But you could collaborate with AmethystMajesty25 on that, since he knows Spy Racers more than we do.

When they get word about the Duck's villain, Big Daddy-O Cool, the mutant monster trucker, who's changed back by Dragunus, Gabby uses her Spy watch to call her cousin, Tony Torreto, and his team for help since they know how to deal with motorized villains.

That's when Karai, Shini, and the CMC can meet the Spy Racers, with Scootaloo getting a crush on Tony which she'll deny, and Cisco and Frostee can be big fans of Shine Boy.

Night Shine: (After meeting Ms Nowhere) Jeez, what a jerk! (Sees the rest of team Shine giving him knowing smirks) What?

Team Shine: Nothing.

When Vern tries to get proof of the Turtles again, Frostee hacks and erases the footage right on the spot. Then allows Caitlyn to use his swarm drones to attack Vern, driving him away.

Frostee: Caitlyn, would you like to do the honors?

Caitlyn: With... Pleasure...

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I think I can squeeze that in. Maybe I’ll do after the next two chapters. Of course, I mean Night of the Shine Spider part 2 and also one where Leo and Wildwing share their leadership experiences. Then I’ll take ya up on your idea

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Also, Zach and Caitlyn have met the Spy Racers in Spy Racers Rio fic.

And here's some quotes.

???: Then you're all luckly that I arrived!

(The Turtles, Rainbooms, and Allies flinched at that voice.)

Gabby: (shut her eyes and grimaced,) Oh nooo!

Sunset: Please tell me that wasn't Ms Nowhere.

Nowhere: Oh yes, it was!

Raph: Just when I thought this day couldn't get any worse.

Phil: Hey, this is private property! You can't just-(Nowhere sprayed him with her knockout gas) Nighty night... (Phil slumped to the floor and fell asleep.)

Duke: Friend of yours?

Rainbow: The big guy is, the lady, not so much!

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Yeah I definitely might need help on the chapter

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Darthwrex might be able to help with that as well.

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I’ll ask him when I get to it

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I came up with quotes of Leo talking with Shining Armour.


Shining: Leo?

Leo: Hey Shining Armour, what’s up?

Shining: I just... wanted to thank you, for helping Twily all this time.

Leo: It’s no problem.

Shining: She’s more lucky to have you in her life than me.

Leo: Shining Armour, you’re her brother.

Shining: But you’ve done a better job at protecting, better than me. I know you’re aware of what happened at the Friendship Games, well I also had a hand in it.

Leo: What?

Shining: When I was a student at Crystal Prep, I competed in the games. We won, and I was super proud of myself. When Principal Cinch told me about wanting Twilight to compete, I thought it might be good for her, help her socialise more. But I guess there was also pride talking. When I found out what happened, and what Cinch did, I was devastated. Twily went through a lot of pain, and I helped put her there.


And that’s all I have at the moment. I thought Shining Armour would feel guilty for helping put Twilight in the Friendship Games.

So, what do you think?

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I think I can put this somewhere in the next chapters.

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That works for me as the oldest you have to look out for your younger siblings

Wildcard25
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It makes sense he would feel guilt. But also how he was not aware that all the other students treated her like an outcast even before the games. Either Twilight never told him or their parents because she didn't wanna let them down and kept it all to herself

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(Everyone sees mutant Shine Boy, who has Vern)

Vern: Mommy!

Mutant Shine Boy: (Roars)

Nosedive: (to the forth wall) And now here's the part where me and Caitlyn scream in mortal terror. (Then he and Caitlyn screamed.)

Twilight: Shine Boy?!

Donnie: By Darwin's beard!

Mikey: He's gone from Shine Boy to... Spider-Shine!

Rainbow: And I thought Aunt Rose was terrifying!

Gabby: (to Spider Bytez, sarcastically) Oh no, Shine Boy's just glowing with health!

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