Hi, I published two stories: “A life full of Surprises and Changes” and “Is darkness really the enemy of light?”. I wanted to have your opinion. I'm not a real writer, just when I have ideas I get on the computer and write. I'm sorry if you find any grammatical errors, but I'm not a native English speaker. However, I tried to correct as many mistakes as possible.

I would love to have your opinion. Thank you

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/522139/a-life-full-of-surprises-and-changes

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/540221/is-darkness-really-the-enemy-of-light

7864048 If you want, you can also add them to:

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and they'll get reviewed.

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Thanksss. But I can't find it...

7864054 They're here:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/217075/folder/80430/request-folder-stories-waiting-for-ai-review-add-all-stories-here

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Thank you!