Hey everyone, I had a story called the hybrid, this is my first story, and I would appreciate if someone would give me a good critique on the story
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/435545/the-hybrid
Hey everyone, I had a story called the hybrid, this is my first story, and I would appreciate if someone would give me a good critique on the story
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/435545/the-hybrid