This chapter is written in my blood.

6149208 The chapter will be posted tomorrow. I made some minor edits; things like typos, inconsistent dash/hyphen use, excessive semicolons, etc. I also edited some parts to give it a more unified perspective and reduce telling. All very minor changes.

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Oh thank Celestia, I don't have to rewrite it again.

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Didn't see any of those on the doc, did it work?

6219940 For the final editing pass of chapters, I've been pasting it into the FIMfic story entry and editing it there. I didn't want to sit through another round of back and forth edits for such minor fixes. If you want a complete changelog, however, then you can use a text comparison program to compare the GDoc version and the FIMfic version