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5718522 So, this story doesn't appear to have been moved to the 'Completed' folder. Unlike the last two.

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I think you forgot to add a link to the story in the description, as I imagine most people would want to check out the story presentation before they click the actual video.

Oh wow! Poetry?? I didn't expect that.

I really appreciate that, though it is very much a parody of "'Twas The Night Before Christmas", it isn't a one-to-one kind of translation. The style and sound of it is nigh identical, but the story isn't the same and the verses aren't just copies with words switched around.

That was super sweet and, aptly, heartwarming, the amusing last line aside. I similarly wouldn't have anything to critique, Flupri; it's just a good feelgood. ^^

Something to take away from this for new writers, I'd say, is that doing something different can be fun. Always take an opportunity to experiment! It may or may not succeed, but you never know what you might discover if you try.