No seriously, you ever seen how these people go around and instead of offering help to make the story better just do nothing? What's there deal? no really; WTF!
This rant, while pretty good, can be improved by correcting the grammar in the above quote.
For instance, the phrase "No, really" would benefit being rewritten like the way I just indicated: capital N and a comma separating the two words. In addition, the ellipsis indicates passive speech, and should probably be exchanged for a comma or semicolon. Finally, "WTF" is a question.
No seriously, you ever seen how these people go around and instead of offering help to make the story better just do nothing? What's there deal? no really; WTF!
This rant, while pretty good, can be improved by correcting the grammar in the above quote.
For instance, the phrase "No, really" would benefit being rewritten like the way I just indicated: capital N and a comma separating the two words. In addition, the ellipsis indicates passive speech, and should probably be exchanged for a comma or semicolon. Finally, "WTF" is a question.
So the way I would write it is: