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So the title kinda states my whole query. How would an author go about introducing an audience to a never before mentioned plot point or concept without causing irritation at a large dump of info. While not for a book or fanfiction i am writing the script to a Game i am developing and at the beginning of my story i need to explain how knights and paladins are classified without it just being a 6 minute expository cutscene. and even further in i wanted to have my group mage explain the differences in magics to a companion during some campfire banter, but everything i write just seems to be unpopular with my betas.

5434863 It's best to do it via conflict. Show a palad doing something out of his classification and the repercussions of it. Show a mage apprentice mess up the spells because of lack of understanding and the mage scolding him.

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