Wow. That's some deep stuff.

I have about 3 or 4 separate copies of The Blizzard Chronicles existent - including this one on Fimfiction - so editing to fix these things are going to be EXTREMELY tedious to do. I think I'm planning, in fact, to take it down off Fimfiction temporarily while I fix these.

Great thoughts, Allen! I can't thank you enough for your criticism. I'll try to use it well!

4403386 I guess I did under-represent . . . a certain serpentine friend a little bit. As it took little to no time for me to discover, I'm not very good at representing his all-over-the-place personality, as I call it.

. . . Yeah, that can definitely use some improvement.