Many thanks. I figured you would fine an errant quotation issue. You're better at spotting those than anybody.
As for the RCA / REA, this would be the Royal Crystal Army vs the Royal Equestrian Army. Not particularly creative names, I realize. But the RCA is out of the picture for the rest of the story anyway, so it shouldn't be causing further confusion.
Also, I actually got a laugh out of you with Flurry's remark. I'm happy now.
Got another.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hawz3B-Zv_iXrLFIFB7huFXW3_vHKZr4uHHYv8_0nKY/edit
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Alright, aside from the loose comments I made on the document page itself, I don't have anything else to add at this time.
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Many thanks. I figured you would fine an errant quotation issue. You're better at spotting those than anybody.
As for the RCA / REA, this would be the Royal Crystal Army vs the Royal Equestrian Army. Not particularly creative names, I realize. But the RCA is out of the picture for the rest of the story anyway, so it shouldn't be causing further confusion.
Also, I actually got a laugh out of you with Flurry's remark. I'm happy now.