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So my OC, Gold Wing, is in my story "The New Elements". He is as spoiled, arrogant brat who only cares about himself (also his parents). He despises doing anything for himself and always has Silver Moon, his body guard, do everything for him (For Silver Moon's personality, see my other thread below). However, he does eventually learn to care about Silver Moon and is horrified whenever she gets hurt (especially when she got one of her limbs dismembered), because to him, she fills the role of his late mother, even though Silver Moon says that that is not her goal. Is his personality too confusing? Your feedback is appreciated! :twilightsmile:

4877814 not if he a self reliezation moment

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He doesn't have a huge, "Oh my gosh I was wrong about everything!" moment, but it's gradual.

4877825 then it's pretty good

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