Composite Score: 70

Congratulations again to the well-renowned author superpony55 for having another story inducted into the archive.

Main reason for score: Moral present and fulfilled (although a rather overdone moral)

This was a real heart warmer. Superpony55 seems to have mastered the technique of the Dawww. The story had some poor word choice in description and some issues with dialogue but most of it could be ignored as the main theme of generosity and Hearth Warming spirit were presented.

The story was short but meaningful. In its limited time it presented a moral that, although a bit overdone, is still important and gave it literary value all on its own.

This story, how ever simply executed, deserved a spot for it's moral and enjoyability.