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Coco Pommel
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VitalSpark #1 · May 8th, 2015 · · ·

It's a quick read — two chapters; about 3500 words total.

I'd like feedback on spelling, grammar, tone, pacing, etc.

If you're interested, then please either reply here, or PM me.

Enclave2277 #2 · May 8th, 2015 · · ·

4348063 I can take a look at it. PM me the link or whatever.

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