looking for people who might be interested in pre-reading.

There, seems to have gone through this time. Tried to do a larger more detailed post but kept getting an error message.

If you follow my link you'll see I've written a pretty big story. "Jake and Kid" over two hundred thousand views, and over 11,000 views, but it is young adult.

I want to try and create a clop story that has a solid foundation, with a good back story to explain why things are happening.

The goal is to get the Main six, Big Mac, and a few other ponies and a few, just a few, OC characters into some seriously kinky stuff.

Likely dark tag, Forced sex fantasy for sure. Mane Six undergoing slave training, very likely.

Possible Twilight Gender swap, in story, to Dusk Shine.

So, something for everyone really.

Got twentyfive thousand words in two chapters. Will need revisions as I'm modifying the causative factors as I've rethought the motivation and goals of the big bad.