Hey guys. I don't know if anybody saw my latest entry to the group, but I wanted a little friendly input on my latest try at a story. First Slice of Life, and it was written all within the span of a few hours as a last minute entry into a forum writing contest. I don't think I'll do too well against my competition, and I may just end up quitting writing because of it, but before then, I would appreciate some input on what you think, if it's not too much trouble.