So I've gotten a prologue all typed up for a new story, and edited by another writer, but I'd like to get some feedback on how interesting the story sounds. There is also a small portion of the first chapter included, and some highlighted areas that I'd especially like feedback on. If you are interested please reply to this, send me a PM, or simply click on the link below.
So I've gotten a prologue all typed up for a new story, and edited by another writer, but I'd like to get some feedback on how interesting the story sounds.
There is also a small portion of the first chapter included, and some highlighted areas that I'd especially like feedback on.
If you are interested please reply to this, send me a PM, or simply click on the link below.
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