I'm writing a comedy fic called "Lyra & Sasquatch." It's about Lyra finding and adopting Bigfoot (or Sasquatch) and the two of them get involved in all sorts of shenanigans. I only received a few comments, and only one of them is actual criticism. May I ask for some feedback? I just want some criticism for anything like pacing, characterization, grammar, dialogue, etc.
I'm writing a comedy fic called "Lyra & Sasquatch." It's about Lyra finding and adopting Bigfoot (or Sasquatch) and the two of them get involved in all sorts of shenanigans. I only received a few comments, and only one of them is actual criticism. May I ask for some feedback? I just want some criticism for anything like pacing, characterization, grammar, dialogue, etc.