My story the five stages of being turned down is about Spike struggling to accept that Rarity is about to marry somebody else. I just finished the 3rd chapter and would like someone to review it and give me an opinion on what they think of it as well as tell me if they see any grammar errors. The chapter is here and the password is madfox.
My story the five stages of being turned down is about Spike struggling to accept that Rarity is about to marry somebody else. I just finished the 3rd chapter and would like someone to review it and give me an opinion on what they think of it as well as tell me if they see any grammar errors.
The chapter is here and the password is madfox.