Hi! Soooo, I’ve just recently started a fic involving Sunset and Vice Principal Luna, I’ve already uploaded 3 chapters but I feel like my writting isn’t great, I have loads of ideas but I’m struggling to get them all done and the way I want them to come across. This is my first fic I’ve EVER wrote, maybe my pacing is too fast? I’m not sure... if someone can read it over that would be a big help!

7051884 Have you tried listening to your story with text to speech?

I've listened to my stories like that at least 50 times, finding stuff to fix with every pass.

Thanks! I’ll give that a try!