Its the fanflic that not many like that I have made but the complaint are things editors could fix. After a while I left it but then I felt like I should finish it. its currently 11 or 10 chapters but can be shortened words wise. Basically I am bad at punctuation right now also I have a hard time phrasing thing that may be hard to explain. I also have a way of being horrible at foreshadowing in this one. Sometimes I am not good at phrasing the way the cmc would talk. Also I think talking about characters having negative emotions is hard for me to make completely interesting and I choose the wrong words.