Hi, I'm Praynfaith96

I recently released a fic titled Fellowship is Miraculous (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/486918/fellowship-is-miraculous) and based on some reviews, it seems like it needs some work.

Note that I am not a full-time writer, it was simply the product of an idea that popped into my head. Perhaps what I'm looking for is help with the execution of this fic. Basically, we would be looking at that while retaining the characters and core concept of this story. I would be asking you to bring about any ideas that could be implemented here or any existing concepts that could be expanded on.

Please note that the story itself is a slice-of-life representation of a young stallion who is Lead Pastor of a church in Ponyville, and goes around interacting with others. A lot of it is based on my own experiences in life, so there's a personal aspect to my writing.

Thank you