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So around a year ago, an author by the name of Evy Dusk brought up an idea in a group called OC's Unite in which he would be creating a Hunger Games Styled Story, and it got a lot of attention and hype. Unfortunately though he soon left Fimfiction and we haven't heard of him since. So I've decided to promise everyone that I'd pick up where he left off. That time has come now.

Starting right now you could submit your OCs to get a chance to have them qualified into entering the story. The rules are simple:
State your Character's Name
State your Character's Backstory
State your Character's Appearance
State whether your character will be a competitor or non-competitor (and state what role they'll play in.)
State your Character's Abilities, Strengths, Weaknesses, Weapon of Choice, Etc
State their Gender, Race, Age, Cutie Mark Etc.

As of right now I am unsure whether to make this story Hunger-Games Stylized or Tournament Stylized. I do not know if the price of failing is just failing, dying, or having their dimension erased. I also don't know what type of system I should use to determine how they'd fight (like D&D Dice, Randomizer, Undertale, Etc). What I do know is that this story will be a blast if things go correctly. So go ahead, submit your OCs, if you're unsure whether your OC should be a Competitor or A Non-Competitor, you could PM me about that and other issues and I'll help you with that. Users like BradyBunch and Jade Dawn had been interested when this idea first appeared back in 2019, so perhaps you'd want to join in too, see if your OCs could topple the rest and win.

Expect the Story to be Rated M for various reasons, with potential tags like Dark, Violence, Blood, Gore, Sad, and perhaps Porn and Sex. Like I said I myself don't know where the story is going. This is why I'm interested in how your OCs will be determining where things go. This story could become comment driven by those who participate in this and also just by fellow viewers, I hope to make this story... 'entertaining'.

Anyways, whatever you choose, be sure to follow up the progress, maybe you might end up being some of the first to read the first chapter when the story finally arrives. because like I said before to those who already participated but never got to see it happen, it's been time that this story idea be finally realized. Peace out,

  1. Name: Odium
  2. Backstory: Many years before the series started, Odium was a young, well-meaning, and helpful pup who was born into an honorable family. They've taught him many different lessons to learn in life in order to be good towards others, but the biggest lesson he learned was that whenever he sees injustice of any kind happening, he should tackle it head on in order to make sure that others don't suffer.

    This made sense as his family moved to and lived in a very disreputable town on the other side of the planet named Rogue Town, where injustice and hardships usually happens on a daily basis due to overpopulation, poverty, and competition for years before he was born. This made Odium's family, who are some of the only ones trying to do something about it, create and uphold to a moral code against injustice in order to make sure that life becomes better for others, whether inside or outside their new and current damaged society.

    Overtime, in Odium's life, he would follow this code for his family and others in order to make life better out of honor and integrity. He's done things like giving an orphan back some bread after it was stolen from him by hooligans before giving them some bread of his own, told off a cruel and abusive family for yelling and kicking out their child, etc. all in the name of honor and integrity. However, this caused him to be so obsessed, single-minded, and blinded by his family's philosophy to the point of downright hatred, confrontation, judgement, self-righteousness and bitterness towards injustice of any kind, as well as towards those who violate said moral code.

    After Odium became old enough to survive on his own, he left his disreputable town and waved goodbye to his honorable and loving family before heading through a barren forest that leads outside of the town named the Black Tree Forest. Suddenly, he hears a strange sound nearby, as if someone was calling his name. Out of curiosity, he decided to follow the sound until he spots a large, deep cave that housed a mysterious seer named Cozbi.

    After asking Cozbi why she called him over to her, she said that she's been watching him for years and wanted to tell him about the future. She then showed him the Mane Six's future misdeeds and screw-ups throughout the series leading up to the penultimate episode of the series, along with Starlight and Discord's misdeeds as well. Most of them looked corrupted and much worse than what was originally presented. She also said that they were evil, vindictive, manipulative beings who didn't get punished for their actions due to using their fake good-nature for manipulative gain on others and that they still won't for a very long time.

    This angered Odium so much that he volunteered to be the one to put them in their place. However, Cozbi said that they are too powerful to defeat without some training and a well-thought-out, long-term plan. Odium asked her if she could train and help him as well as show him their strengths, weaknesses, and pet peeves, so that he doesn't set them off during his journey against them. She accepted and they both began training, though what Odium didn't know was that Cozbi had other motives besides just helping him.

    After years of training, planning, and studying the Mane Six, Starlight, and Discord, Cozbi finally said that Odium is ready and gave him one of her ancient weapons before painfully dying of old age and turning to dust right in front of him. This traumatized Odium greatly before he headed out on his journey against the Mane Six and the others.

    During his journey, however, he began to see injustices everywhere he went and decided to stop it with no reward or recognition. Like helping an old lady against a pack of criminals, defeating a giant rock monster for a lost child, etc. Despite his good deeds, however, that still didn't stop his journey to go after the Mane Six, Starlight, and Discord for their misdeeds. In fact, it only strengthened his belief that what he's about to do to them is the right thing to do.

  3. Appearance: Odium is an slim, anthropomorphic, bipedal, grey wolf with a white underside and dark-gray tips on both his ears and long, spiky tail. He also has spiky hair on both the top and sides of his head and turquoise eyes with black, vertical slit pupils and white highlights, as well as pink skin on the inside of his ears. He has a medium-sized snout and black nose, as well as white, sharp, canine teeth and claws. He's also taller than the Mane Six, but shorter than Discord.

    His clothing consists of a dark-brown, long-sleeved, vigilante jacket with a dark-gray, golden-buckled strap, and a dark-blue, white and black arrow cross symbol on each side and elbow. He also wears light-brown shorts held by a dark-gray, golden-buckled belt and has a turquoise feather on the front of each pant-leg. He also has a dark-blue stripe around the bottom end of his jacket, sleeves, and pant-legs. He also wears no socks or shoes.

    He also carries a long, light-brown, magic-proof, wooden staff with three small, bent branches on the top end and white bandages wrapped around the middle of it, on his back.

  4. Competition and Role: Competitor; Fighter
  5. Abilities: Enhanced Condition, Average Strength, Martial Arts, Keen Senses, Bojutsu
  6. Strengths: Great Physical Prowess, Fighting Abilities, Above-Average Intelligence
  7. Weaknesses: Gullibility, Naivety, Lack of Raw Power, Hatred, Extremely Powerful and Experienced Opponents, Neck weakpoint, Fear of Fire, Fear of Losing Loved Ones, Fear of Being a Bad Person, Stubborn Sense of Integrity, Arrogance, Plateau Effect
  8. Weapon of Choice: His trusty magic-proof bo-staff that was given to him by a seer who trained him for years before her death of old-age.
  9. Gender: Male
  10. Age: 27
  11. Race: Anthropomorphic, Mythological Grey Wolf
  12. Personality: Unlike other villains in the series, who's goal are motivated by power, control, revenge, amusement, etc., Odium is driven by justice and a strict moral compass against the Mane Six, Starlight, and Discord for their "twisted" and "corrupted" misdeeds on others throughout the series. He personally thinks that he's the only one who can put them in their place and is willing to do whatever it takes to make sure they get the consequences they deserved.

    However, he wasn't always this way. Originally, Odium was just a very young, well-meaning, honorable, helpful, and curious, yet very introverted, insecure, and naive at times pup.

    Overtime, though, while he still has at least some of those well-meaning and naive traits, Odium grew very hateful, unforgiving, bitter, aggressive, confrontational, and at times short-tempered of injustice of any kind as well as towards those who violate or have violated said moral code due to his family's flawed, yet understandable moral code and living in a place full of injustice and hardships ever since after his family moved out and after his birth.

    Odium has become so single-minded, narrow, and limited in his own moral compass and view of justice and consequentialism to the point of being downright obsessive, arrogant, judgemental, and self-righteous at times. He is so determined and devoted to his own moral philosophy and wants others to follow it that he may even use aggression and violence towards those who violate it.

    Despite acting very serious and determined on the outside, Odium can also be very gullible, curious, trusting, and idealistic towards those who need his help. This is one of the reasons why he was tricked by Cozbi for years due to thinking that she was just someone who needed his help and assistance when needed. He can be indecisive and full of doubts, confusion, and turmoil when faced with a moral dilemma of what's right and what's wrong.

    However, he's not outright dumb or slow-witted and has above-average intelligence and perception when it comes to things like psychology and observation. He only has trouble with social interactions and usually enjoys being by himself due to only interacting with his family and a few other people during his journey before meeting the Mane Six and their friends.

    Odium is very courageous and brave for the most part, willing to risk his own life for others even if it means fighting till his last breath. His determination, little regard for his own safety, and perception makes him a very dangerous opponent. The only things that he's truly afraid of are fire, losing loved ones, and being a bad person.

    In spite of Odium's flaws, He does have his good qualities as well. He does genuinely care about and is compassionate towards those who are either close to him or aren't his target's. He's also capable of self-reflection, vulnerability, and a lot of remorse for his own injustices and actions deep down, especially when realizing them. He can also be very self-conscious and shy about his actions and doesn't like excuses from either himself or others. Despite his hatred towards his targets' for their injustices, he's willing to be more careful and considerate when it comes to the things that they personally care about and hold value to. He can also be very merciful towards others, even said target(s), when they show absolute fear or flinch in front of him. Despite his arrogance, he can be very selfless, honest, helpful and willing to put himself in danger and sacrifice himself, even postponing his journey for the sake of helping others in spite of his single-mindedness.

    Odium has two similar motivations. His main motivation for his actions is because he wants to help and make life better for others and doesn't like to see them suffer or let others who've caused their suffering get away with it for the greater good. However, due to his single-minded, self-righteous, arrogant, unforgiving, and somewhat distrustful flaws towards his target(s), as well as his usual gullibility and naivete towards those who need his help, he can sometimes forget his own injustices and, when he realizes them, becomes so distraught and full of self-loathing that he feels like he's unworthy of forgiveness and redemption, especially from those he's hurt.

    His second motivation is because he wants to preserve and live up to his caring family's reputation for honorable behavior and integrity. This is one of the reasons why he was so distraught, broken, and hurt when he found out that they were possibly gone, along with literally everything else that he had, after years of being tricked by Cozbi, due to his mutual love for them and everything they taught him.

    Despite his gullibility and naivety, Odium is at least mature enough to know that forgiveness and redemption doesn't come easy, at least for him. When he's not being hostile, violent, short-tempered, antagonistic, judgemental, serious, or unforgiving, he's usually a real sweetheart who only wants to do what is right and gets distraught and full of self-hatred when he realizes that what he's doing is extremely wrong.

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