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I have this gore scene and will have more later on but I'm just horrible at them! think any of you could help me out on this?:pinkiesad2:

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Really describe it- like, for example, if a character is stabbed in the throat, describe how the blood gushes out and splatters while they choke on it. Another example, say the character's head gets smashed in, describe the splintered skull piercing their flesh and the blood, and the oozing brains. Oh, describing the sound it makes too, like: Their skull splintered with a sound like someone had just taken several eggs and crushed them all at once. Something like that.
Anyways, I hoped this helped:scootangel:

-Mudraynebow

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Glad to help:twilightsmile:

-Mudraynebow

Also describe the feeling like you did with the sound, like 'crap I dunno :fluttershyouch:

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