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FlanChan
Group Admin

Hello, everypony! Today I would like to bother tell you about my story, and I was hoping for feedback on it. So far it's been featured twice, so it probably doesn't stink! :twilightblush:
It's called The Generation That Even Time Has Forgotten

It's basically a story about Twilight getting tricked by Discord into being sent back in time to G3! Nothing could go wrong! But now she has to find a way back, and survive being around all of these crazy new ponies! :pinkiegasp:
I have gotten quite a few reviews on this story, but I'm always asking for more! I mostly want help with the plot and grammar. Be nitpicky!
Thanks!

Hingard
Group Contributor

Your story is next on my reading list, expect a review from me in a few hours. :twilightsmile:

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