I'm not going to sugarcoat it, I have a train wreck in my gallery but for some reason folks are still reading it.
I guess I owe it to the readers to fix it up. Maybe.

I need to know if this story is worth fixing.

I posted fifteen chapters here, but the whole story is up on google docs.
Maybe you won't need the whole story but if you do, let me know.

What is the story about?
*Sighs*
A pony deity turns some humans into anthro ponies and when the world is trying to adapt to that aliens invade. Some ponies from Equestria help out. Basically, its the rise of the Terran six with help from the Mane six.

This is before I started working with a one sentence theme.

This is a dark adventure story with gore and violence.
No clop but there are some innuendos.

Here is the trainwreck:

All you have to do is to read it and hopefully not weep too much.

Find something in the first four paragraphs that pisses you off, tell me about it.
Got to the end of chapter fifteen and it seems okay, tell me about that too.
PM me what you found.

If you do this, I can help you if you need a pre reader.