So, I've been working on my 1st fic. A Gears of War crossover (if you couldn't tell by the title). To be honest, I need help. I don't have writers block or do I need any ideas (aren't those two the same, oh well). If someone would like to edit/proofread/preview it and give me constructive criticism on it, please let me know. Thanks.

Hmm. I might be up for the task.