PonyFall Chapter 9 Being Re-written. · 11:30pm Dec 13th, 2012
Apparently the chapter had a lot more problems than I previously expected. After receiving some rather interesting criticism from Daemon and a couple of other... well, events, I decided to have a talk with Slorg, and we both agreed that I pretty much screwed the pooch with this recent chapter.
A lot of the things I've written didn't make sense from a reality standpoint. I knew with the fake murderer stance that Gordon was putting on would need to be explained pretty damn well in order for it to make any sense at all, but it seems I've failed in that regard, and just didn't think out this new chapter too well.
So therefore, Chapter 9 is being removed to undergo changes... major changes. Chapter 8 will also receive some slight alterations to reflect the re-written chapter. I must apologize for any readers that took offense in the latest chapter. This is what I get for trying to make things interesting instead of following logic. >_>
You're kidding! I didn't even get to read it! Curse my lateness! Is there anyway I can read the so called "problematic" chapter!?!?! Please! I promise not to criticize! Please please please please!
608212 hehehe I got to read it
I feel priviledged
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Aw mare! Was it good? Was it really really good!? I'll bet it was fantastic!
Oh shot, You made another chapter on Ponyfall finally? I had almost forgotten about it, better go and give it a favorite so I can keep tracks of the updates. Thanks for the heads up
Aww man it was good, not for the plot but for the action, which was what you were probably gong for. Welp hope your edits are just as good.
P.S. You probably heard enough of this but, It seems that you're back on updating your older stories, any plans with Naruto updates?, im rereading it and loving the adventure all over again!
Good Luck to ya.