Sneak peak · 5:52pm Sep 19th, 2022
Hello everyone, hope, everyone is doing okay so far today. Now the reason it says, sneak peak is, well I’m showing you guys a little peak in the chapter I’m working on. So without further ado here we go.
A explosion was heard in the town, before anyone can realized what happen, it was followed by scream’s of ponies at the edge of town before long, musket fire, was heard by the rest of the town, yelling and shouting were heard from the attackers and civilians alike.
But as that was happening Night rose mother had a worry look in her eyes, before she could ask, her mother said to her, “ Sweetie go get your brother please” her mother said to her with a sad look in her eyes.
“But mom what happing, what’s going o-“before she could finish her mother intruped her,
“ Sweetie ,go get your brother, and some of yours things. I promise I will explain everything soon when you get back down here but I have to get some things ready, so for now just go get your brother. Now!” Her mother said with her voice almost sounding broken, as she left to go something from her bedroom.
As soon as she did night rose went up the stairs and down the hall to hers little brothers room, as she looked into the room and stepped, she looked into crib, there asleep, peacefully was her unicorn brother, shine nightlight unaware of the world he was born in was crumbling around him, so carefully she wrapped her right wing under him picking him up from out of the crib and placed him gently inside baby pouch, strapped to her chest as she gathered some of her brothers blanket and some pacifiers and one toy into the baby bag along with some diapers along too then she was off but not before grabbing a photo of her family and friends and her journal/dairy, and her book and her stuffed animal into another saddle bag, then she exited the room.
As soon as she got downstairs things looked worse on the streets with her mother in the kitchen making some food and snacks and placing them into a bag as soon as she her the clip,clop of little hoofs, as she looked up with water in her eyes, as she finished packing up the food for her two children.
Before Rose could ask, her mother wrapped her wings around the both of them telling them that she loved them both but pulled away, as rose asks “ mom what’s going on? Why all you packing food and me since and medical supplies?” As she looked at her mother whose tears were flowing down her checks.
As her mother placed one of her wings on her telling her daughter, “ I am sending both of you away, and before you say anything, yes it saddens me and my soul but, I’ll just slow you down and you too can move a little faster without me, plus I will provide a distraction for you two to escape.” She said when assertiveness in her voice as she then turned to put on some armor and her husband sword.
As she finishes putting on the gear, she then turns around seeing tears forming in roses eyes, as she walked over giving her the food and supplies as she hugged them one last time, but soon the yelling of soldiers heard from outside, and then the sound of the door being knocked on, as she said to rose hide, as she went over to the door readying the sword just in case as she went to answer the door.
She opened it and saw a horse shoe insignia on their collar, as the lead earth pony asked, night shiner “ hello miss but do you have any unicorns in here by any chance do you?” The soldier asked her and replied with “ no unicorns here, now please lea-“ soon crying was heard by them as the saw a little bat pony filly holding a unicorn bat pony”
Before they had a chance to reacted the mother stabbed the lead soldier telling her children to “RUN, go into the woods and hide, hurry” she said stabbing another soldier as he tried to attack only to get stabbed in the heart.
“No” night rose said “I don’t what to leave you. Please mom, please come with us!” Night rose said with tears in her and voice breaking down and heart bring broken.
“I am so sorry my children, but I will always be with yo-ackk” her sentence was cut off as a musket ball was fired into her body and a Pegasus of the earthborn guards tackled her to the ground, before being tossed off into the stallion who was still reloading the earthborn hand cannon.
As they were still down the mother now bleeding grabbing both the bags and her children and dragged them outside placing them both in a celler in the woods, placing leaves over it but not before mouthing “ I will always be with you”, and she gives a peak on their heads as she places the last breach covered with leaves mover the celler door, and went back to divert their attention to her.
As she went back to the side of her house she sees a squad of house earthborn soldiers with Pegasus an Buffalo in the mix.
As the turn their attention on her, she looks back to the cellar in the woods, shedding a tear as she gives one final look at the cellar,
Pretty nice. Sounds like trailer to new series of some shows...
5687356
Thanks that’s what I was going for since well it’s set in the equestria divided universe.
And holy cow are you already done reading?!
And thanks for the feedback
I'm guessing that the mare will be a future agent, yes?
5687366
Wait do you mean the mother right?
5687456
I meant the daughter, when she grows up to join the Division.
Besides, the mother probably won't survive this. Because A. She is already wounded and bleeding.
B. She is outnumbered and outgunned.
And C. This is obviously a tragic story of "losing your mother/parent and village" cliche.
5687458
Well yes but I probably should have change it to village now instead since that is I think how the bat pony community lives or in towns maybe.
But you also have to remember that she also has a baby brother down their too and they still haven’t met the divsion agents yet.
Also the cellers locked too so who is going to open it for her hmmm?
Oh by the way what do you think so far and my interpretation of the house earthborn eh since they are anti-princess mostly or forced too
5687458
Wait a minute do you live in a different time zone where it’s 1 something in the morning?
5687462
I'm in the Eastern Time Zone of USA.
Right now is 11:23.
5687505
Ah same it’s 12:27 over her right now
5687505
But still, what did you think eh?
Pretty accurate at least for most of house earthborn
Thats pretty good, hopefully the story will come out soon. Good work.😀
5687528
Oh it will my friend, it will, but still you like it so far eh?
5687517
Eh, I don't remember much. All I know is that's it's corrupt Applejack's "house clan".
5687532
Yep but
Let’s just say not all of them are blindly following her including some of her own kin
5687531
Yes, so far i think its pretty unique and interesting. But i got some catching up to do on equestria divided.
5687547
Actually I can link the factions descriptions if you want
5687547
Here’s house earthborn
https://www.deviantart.com/equestria-divided/gallery/
Mean here’s where you can find some descriptions of the factions
5687356
So you like it eh?
5687528
Thanks for the compliment pretty good for my first/second time writing eh
5687552
, it literally reminds me of warhammer 40k but with ponies for some reason.
Thanks for the link
Still cool.
5687554
Your welcome and was just trying to help is all.
And that’s exactly what op Omni God-Emperor doom said too
But it also kind of reminds me of the division and division 2 a little bit b/c of the different factions and way they act a little bit, like House Everfree is like the outcasts a little bit, House Earthborn =True son, House Stormwind a little bit of the last man battalion.